Okay. I read this last night, thought about it, slept on it, got up this morning, thought about it some more. Been thinking about it a while, actually. So, here's my two cents:
1. If it's submitted to JK2, my first suggestion would be to change its name. I know, I know.... the name is her most endearing feature.
Personally, though, I tend not to download personal skins or clan skins unless I just really like that player personally or happen to play with that clan. And if you're going to submit it, you want it to be downloaded by as many people as possible. Right? Right. So, name her something generic like "Celtic Warrior". (That goes for the bot as well.
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2. Think I mentioned that most of the skirt disintegration issues go away if you just cover her rear. It's hard to pinpoint in the jpeg, but the tops of her thighs are actually on the left-hand side of that image and no self-respecting Celt is going to wear a thong under the kilt anyway. Nothing? Maybe. But we won't go there.
3. The skirt "balloons" quite a bit as it's open to the waist. I know nothing about modeling or how hard it might be, but can the skirt be "bolted" to the model's hips? If it can, it would look more natural and form-fitting.
4. Speaking of form-fitting, the top seems a little out-of-kilter with the bottom. She's just a bit out-of-balance, wearing a chainmaille top with a wool skirt. (Brrrrrrr.) I really like the look of the RJWolfe shirt and would love to hear Angel's take on the Celtic Warrior's top. Something with the textures and folds of Jedi Desaan's ensemble with the kind of bold accents seen on the Wolfe would maybe help balance it out. (I really can't get over that whole Wolfe ensemble. The colors; the detail. Fantastic.)
5. She looks like a Warrior, but she sure doesn't sound like one. And this goes back to the incredibly hard-to-find female sounds discussed elsewhere. I won't tell you what I think she actually sounds like. Let's just say guys will love it; girls will hate it --
with a passion.
6. That bot. Hmmmm. "Hiya, everybody!" ??? Chances are good warriors don't talk like that, either.
Little too "cutesie" for my taste. She could spawn or respond greet with something like, "Is minic a gheibhean beal oscailt diog dunta!" (An open mouth often invites a closed fist.) In other words, ditch the Molly Ringwold and think more Maureen O'hara!
The model is fantastic, Beast. I can tell you, tho, that female players probably won't download it. Thing is, there are so many more male players than female players. So, I guess you just have to use your best discretion there.
I will be happy to think on this some more and contribute anything I can in the way of say bot files, sounds, jpegs (or at least direction to body parts on jpegs) or anything else I can do, if you desire.